Your fic is fine. We're our own worst critics, after all. I've cranked fics out in a rush and hated them, only to have them garner more oohs and aahs than ones I'd slaved over. *head desk* One for HD365 in particular stands out. I had to whip up a replacement fic at the last moment, and it was only about 180 words, yet so many people just loved it. I was like, "What fic are you reading?!" Ha ha ha!