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nicevenn ([personal profile] nicevenn) wrote2010-08-05 09:31 pm

Drabble: The First and the Last

Title: The First and the Last
Author: [livejournal.com profile] drippingcherry
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: ~350
Summary: It's Harry and Draco's wedding night, and Draco is furious.
A/N: This was written for [livejournal.com profile] lokifan's comment party in celebration of the overturning of Proposition 8. Based on her second prompt: Unfortunately, Character A had no idea Character B wasn't a virgin. And the honeymoon was fast approaching.



There was a sense of urgency in Harry's touch tonight that was unlike anything Draco had experience before. It was to be expected, Draco supposed, considering that it was their wedding night and they were about to make love for the first time. But therein also lay the problem: first times called for a bit of hesitancy, at least a hint of shyness and nervous fumbling. Yet Harry's kisses and caresses flowed from one to the next like the steps of a well-practised dance.

Draco pulled away from Harry's mouth and grabbed his newly wedded husband's wrist to still the hand that was reaching behind him. He gave an anxious laugh. "You're acting as if you've done this a hundred times."

"A hundred is a bit of an exaggeration." Harry leaned forward, eager to resume their kiss, but Draco pulled back even further.

"WHAT?"

"It's probably closer to twenty," said Harry. "I don't know – I haven't kept track."

Draco jumped off Harry's lap as if he'd been burned. "But I thought – "

"I never told you I was a virgin, Draco. You just assumed."

Draco's mouth hung open until he found his voice again. "I guess I should have known that the great Harry Potter couldn't have kept his cock in his trousers this long. I just hope it hasn't been anywhere since we started dating – "

"No, it hasn't," Harry ground out through his teeth. "Now could you please not ruin this night for us?"

Draco crossed his arms over his chest and looked down at the floor. "It's already been ruined for me."

Harry sighed, but his expression was apologetic. He bit his lip. "There is something I haven't done before." Dark eyebrows rose toward his hairline.

"What?"

Harry hesitated. "I've never bottomed."

Draco didn't answer, but his feet itched to step closer to where Harry sat on the edge of the bed.

"How about it?" asked Harry, reaching out towards Draco. "Would it make you feel better to be the first to breach the great Harry Potter's arse?"

Draco tried not to smile. "Only if I'll also be the last."

[identity profile] avenalanon.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 02:40 am (UTC)(link)
Awwwwww :) So cute, i'm still giggling.

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 02:41 am (UTC)(link)
Hehe, I'm glad you liked it :)

[identity profile] khasael.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 03:21 am (UTC)(link)
Aww. Absolutely adorable.

(alliteration ftw?)

[identity profile] mab.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 03:31 am (UTC)(link)
OMG I love it so much. Just too precious!

~Mab

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
Heee, thanks!

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 03:47 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks :)

[identity profile] dm999.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 04:22 am (UTC)(link)
sequel? ^_^
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[personal profile] aerisaturner 2010-08-06 05:27 am (UTC)(link)
"Would it make you feel better to be the first to breach the great Harry Potter's arse?"

*giggles*

Oh Harry...

[identity profile] paper-moonshine.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 05:58 am (UTC)(link)
This is really cute, nicely done :)

[identity profile] luredbyvenus.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 06:06 am (UTC)(link)
This was so cute. :D

[identity profile] punkangel2254.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 06:43 am (UTC)(link)
awwwww cuteness

[identity profile] thrnbrooke.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 06:56 am (UTC)(link)
That's one way to make it up to him!!!

[identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 07:26 am (UTC)(link)
LOL to cute *g*
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[identity profile] easilymused1956.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 11:12 am (UTC)(link)
I do love how Harry makes things up to Draco!

Renee

[identity profile] alovelycupoftea.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 11:24 am (UTC)(link)
Adorable!

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 12:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I think this one's alright on it's own (in other words, I have too much fic on my plate). Glad you enjoyed it, though!

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 12:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha, I was waiting for someone to quote that line :D

Thank you!

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 12:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you ♥

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 12:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 12:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks :)

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 12:11 pm (UTC)(link)
It sure is :D

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 12:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Love your icon, LOL.

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 12:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it :)

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 12:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you ♥

[identity profile] lilyginny27.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 01:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh My God. I can't believe they had never actually talked about it before this point. LOL! Too funny.

[identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 05:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks it is cool :D

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 05:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, Draco didn't ask and Harry was afraid to come out and say, "By the way, I'm not a virgin." LOL.
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[personal profile] lokifan 2010-08-06 05:56 pm (UTC)(link)
You know I love this, but allow me to emphasise:

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[identity profile] fancypantsdylan.livejournal.com 2010-08-06 06:42 pm (UTC)(link)
*giggles* aww Harry saved the best for Draco ;D
Edited 2010-08-06 18:43 (UTC)

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-08-07 03:02 am (UTC)(link)
Yay!

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-08-07 03:03 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, he did :)

[identity profile] enchanted-jae.livejournal.com 2010-08-07 04:02 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, Draco. *snickers*
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[personal profile] aerisaturner 2010-08-07 05:55 am (UTC)(link)
Glad to be of service *grins and bows*

Oh and np :)

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-08-07 06:16 am (UTC)(link)
He wanted to be the first, the last, and the only in everything!

[identity profile] babydracky.livejournal.com 2010-08-07 10:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww!! That was cute!
Love the jealous!virgin!Draco^^

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-08-18 02:46 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you :)
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[identity profile] captain-tibbs.livejournal.com 2012-08-15 02:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Adore the pricklyness of Draco being all offended about Harry's lack of virginity.