omg... that was hot... but:

He didn’t know how long he had stood there with the scar pressed against his face....

lol... no offense, but i think harry's had a scar pressed against his face for quite a long time....

j.k. i just wanted to point out that you'd skipped a letter there. i really did love the story, btw, especially ron catching them. it was just that one thing that stuck out, so i figured i'd let you know.