sure, just give me your email. I don't have chapter two yet, but I'd like to have chapter 1 beta'd first. Like you said, I'd like to have not only the grammar checked, but also suggestions on how to improve flow, etc. Unfortunately, most betas stop at grammar. I'm really glad to have yura_slash betaing Lost Grimiore. She totally takes my writing apart, which makes me feel like I did a horrible job, but it's worth the improvement in the end. :)
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Date: 2006-06-28 06:41 pm (UTC)