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nicevenn ([personal profile] nicevenn) wrote2010-10-11 01:57 pm

Happy birthday, Groolover!

Title: Five Things Draco Loves Hates About Potter
Author: [livejournal.com profile] nicevenn
Beta/Brit-pick:[livejournal.com profile] nursedarry
Rating: R
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Wordcout:535
Disclaimer: Harry Potter is the property of J.K. Rowling. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: See title.
A/N: Written as a birtday gift for [livejournal.com profile] groolover.



1. The glasses

They’ve been grating on Draco’s nerves since he first met Potter at Madam Malkin’s so many years ago. Why do they have to be round? No one wears round spectacles anymore. Potter seems oblivious to that fact, though, just as he seems oblivious to how vulnerable and fuckable he looks whenever those bloody glasses fall off during Auror missions, and for those few seconds after he wakes up, as he searches blindly for them on the bedside table

They press into Draco’s cheek when he and Potter kiss. (Draco especially hates this during winter, when the rims get even colder than the biting wind.) Then Potter berates him for getting the lenses dirty. Worst of all, Draco always comes a little too soon if Potter happens to take his glasses off before a shag.


2. The scar

Draco has hated that scar since the first time he saw it. It peeks out from under Potter’s fringe, calling attention to itself as if it, not Draco, were his trophy. Sometimes Draco can’t resist the urge to trace its lightning bolt shape with the tip of his finger while Potter is asleep. A shock goes through his arm then, and he lies awake for hours, wondering what his life would be like – what the world would be like – if Potter hadn’t survived.


3. The hair

It always looks as if Potter just got out of bed after a Sunday morning shag. (Those are Draco’s favourite.) Potter is constantly running his hand through it in attempt to appear presentable, but that never helps. And there’s more…

The faint fruit punch scent of Potter’s hair often reminds Draco of sex at the most inopportune moments, like when his parents are visiting. His thoughts inevitably drift to silky black strands tickling his thighs and getting tangled around his fingers as he pulls Potter’s head down on him.


4. Potter is too lazy to shave

Draco’s grooming is immaculate. His fingernails are always manicured, his hair neatly slicked back, and his face as smooth and soft as an infant's. So, naturally, it embarrasses him when Potter goes out looking like he forgot to shave for two days in a row. The rough stubble scratches Draco’s skin when they snog before work, leaving him with more than one kind of itch for the rest of the day. It also makes Potter seem crude and barbaric, and the sex so much dirtier.


5. And he's obsessed with coffee

Whenever they have a day off, Potter insists that they visit a certain Muggle café, where he buys them both drinks called lattes. Draco tells Potter that he only likes going there during autumn, when he can buy a pumpkin-spice flavoured one. He says it’s the only thing that reminds him that he’s a wizard, and a pure-blood, while sitting surrounded by Muggles. He hates that that’s a lie, and that he enjoys going to the café during winter, too.

Some days, instead of chatting at one of the small tables, they go for a slow walk around London, holding hands and sipping their steaming drinks. Draco secretly wishes there’d be more of such days. But he won’t tell Potter that, because he likes pretending he isn’t head over heels in love with him.

[identity profile] sajmalfoy13.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 07:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Fun!!

The last line is great!!!

:)

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 07:18 pm (UTC)(link)
It is now that I fixed the TWO mistakes it had! *headdesk*

Thanks.:)

[identity profile] wendypops.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 07:26 pm (UTC)(link)
This is so cute! I love this idea. Very adorable.

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 07:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. ♥

[identity profile] fancypantsdylan.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 07:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww Draco's so silly, cause you know Harry knows all those things anyway ;)

Lovely sweetie.

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 07:43 pm (UTC)(link)
He sure does! Thanks. :)

[identity profile] kayoko.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 07:37 pm (UTC)(link)
I loved #5 cause it really encompassed the whole hate-but-really-love theme to their relationship. Very mushy!

Thanks for sharing!

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 07:43 pm (UTC)(link)
#5 is my favorite, too. *happy sigh*
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[personal profile] alafaye 2010-10-11 07:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 07:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] sue-dell.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 08:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely and squishy and gorgeous! It gave me a lovely warm feeling. Perfect!

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 08:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad. Thanks!
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[identity profile] cynaga.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 08:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely~!

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 08:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] drarryxlover.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 08:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh it's so adorable! I just want to squish Draco but I don't think harry would be to pleased ;) so I'll just squish you instead! *squishes*

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 08:53 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you liked it.

*squishes back*

[identity profile] latex-muffins.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 09:08 pm (UTC)(link)
I think I just melted from the cute :]
It's been a while since I've read your stuff! I've missed it dearly. ♥

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 09:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, that's sweet. I'm glad to see you back.

*hugs*
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[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. :)

[identity profile] groolover.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 09:13 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this :-) It put a big smile on my face, and those have been in very short supply lately. Thank you so much!

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 09:27 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm happy you liked it. Hope you have a good day tomorrow.!

[identity profile] fantasyfruitbat.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 09:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, that's lovely!! I do so love in_denial!Draco, and it's even better when he secretly knows he loves Harry! :)

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 09:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. :)
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[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 09:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. :)
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[personal profile] lokifan 2010-10-11 09:29 pm (UTC)(link)
LOVE LOVE LOVE. ♥ You win, my dear.

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 09:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. ♥

[identity profile] geneva2010.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 09:38 pm (UTC)(link)
This was very Draco. Nice.

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 10:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] lilliephoenix.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 10:32 pm (UTC)(link)
lovely. i love how someone can create a story with so few words.

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 11:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] lonewhiterose.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 11:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, so adorable!! This is why I love fandom!Draco. Because he thinks all these sappy things about Harry and doesn't think that Harry already knows these things and that's half the reason he loves Draco in the first place. ♥
And I loved #5. They're so cute *hug*

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 12:08 am (UTC)(link)
I love him, too. Glad you enjoyed it!

[identity profile] ange.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 02:02 am (UTC)(link)
<3 This was totally adorable!

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 02:12 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] tigersilver.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 02:31 am (UTC)(link)
[HUGE GRIN]
I love these list-y fics, short and to the point and oh, so smile-inducing! Thank you!
Happy Birthday, groolover! Wish you a merry one!

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 04:13 am (UTC)(link)
So do I! Thanks for commenting. :)

[identity profile] sabinefrappe.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
Sweet! Love those kinds of lists. I'll bet Draco's list is a lot longer than the peek he let us have.

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 04:14 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, definitely. And Harry has one, too. ;)

[identity profile] enchanted-jae.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 03:58 am (UTC)(link)
That's so cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute! Love it!

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 04:15 am (UTC)(link)
:D :D :D
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[identity profile] lisbet.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 04:05 am (UTC)(link)
Awwww....love it! Especially the last line. And the coffee part, too:)

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 04:15 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. ♥

[identity profile] nenne.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 05:37 am (UTC)(link)
That was lovely. Just lovely.

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 11:41 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] awakejupiter.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 07:30 am (UTC)(link)
So sweet. :)

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 11:42 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks. :)

[identity profile] paper-moonshine.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 12:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Super cute - loved it!

[identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com 2010-10-12 12:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

Perfect icon. :)
Edited 2010-10-12 12:44 (UTC)

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