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Title: A Lot of Gryffindor
Author: [livejournal.com profile] nicevenn
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 316
Beta: [livejournal.com profile] nursedarry
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement in intended.
Summary: Draco's first time isn't what he expected.
A/N: This was written as a gift for [livejournal.com profile] susan5124 for correctly guessing which Hols fic I wrote! Her prompts were first time and "Ah! You said it wouldn't hurt!"



"Ah! You said it wouldn't hurt!"

Draco held Harry firmly by the hips to prevent him from going any deeper.

"No, I said I didn't think it would hurt," Harry said, panting (which Draco thought was ridiculous, as he hadn't even got the head in yet). "I wouldn't actually know—"

Draco knew he ought to be angry, but looking up into the other boy's lust-glazed eyes, he couldn't quite manage. He let go of Harry's hips and gripped the sheets instead. "Just get on with it, then."

Harry's lips curved into a crooked smile. "I knew you had some Gryffindor in you."

Draco felt a stab of pain as Harry pushed forward. His muscles gave way, allowing Harry's lubed cock to glide in effortlessly while they both gasped and moaned. It was the most erotic thing Draco had ever felt.

"A lot of Gryffindor," Harry amended, once his hips were pressing against the back of Draco's thighs.

Before Draco could argue about the exact quantity of Gryffindor inside him, Harry kissed him. Their tongues slid together slowly as Harry began to rock. The burn began to subside, and in its place Draco felt an odd sensation of fullness mingled with an insatiable need for more, more, more.

It was the perfect first time, Draco thought; that is, until Harry's breath hitched and he threw his head back with a silly, enraptured look on his face.

"Damn you, Potter," Draco said as he reached in between their bodies to take himself in hand. His strokes were as jerky and rough as Harry's final thrusts. He came with a groan, heat sliding down his hand and dribbling onto his lower belly.

"All right?" Harry asked afterwards, looking down at Draco with concern.

Draco thought Harry should have asked him that before he'd lost control, but it had felt good and, again, he found himself unable to be angry.

"More than all right."
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Date: 2011-01-11 10:22 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-01-11 10:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmagrant01.livejournal.com
Hee! Oh, boys. :-)

Date: 2011-01-11 10:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
First times are so cute!

Date: 2011-01-11 10:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mijeli.livejournal.com
Can't help imagining Draco's perfect scowl, even in bed ;) (Well, not for long.) Yay for realistic first time!

Date: 2011-01-11 11:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
Thanks. :)

Date: 2011-01-11 10:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] purple-lights.livejournal.com
Aw! So cute!! ^^

Date: 2011-01-11 11:06 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-01-11 10:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com
Aww, that's sweet! I love playful bedroom banter <3

Date: 2011-01-11 11:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
Me too! Thanks.

Date: 2011-01-11 10:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misbehavingmom.livejournal.com
hehehe...I absolutely love the title! This drabble put a smile on my face and dirty thoughts in my mind...I love it ;) Wonderful, sweetie ♥

Date: 2011-01-11 11:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
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Date: 2011-01-11 11:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
Don't worry, he enjoyed himself. :)

Date: 2011-01-11 11:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com
I love the drabble and title. I like how realistic of a first time it is.

Date: 2011-01-11 11:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
Thank you. :)

Heh. Wish I had a Gryffindor equivalent of your icon.

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From: [identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com - Date: 2011-01-11 11:17 pm (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2011-01-12 02:09 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-01-12 12:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zebrui.livejournal.com
Adorable boys =)

Date: 2011-01-12 02:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
*cuddles them*

Date: 2011-01-12 01:07 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] susan5124.livejournal.com
Thank you! I love this so much! First times have to be one of my favorite things along with banter and hotness. This had all 3! So much fun to read!

Date: 2011-01-12 02:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2011-01-12 01:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kitschobrien.livejournal.com
That was adorable. I'm glad that even though it hurt as far as first times usually go, that Draco enjoyed it. I also liked that Harry didn't wank Draco off. XD. Some people write virgins fucking like pornstars, and that is *so* not how it goes. Cute! (I rambled sry)

Date: 2011-01-12 02:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
I I've imperfect first times. Glad you liked it, too!

Date: 2011-01-12 02:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilyginny27.livejournal.com
Adorably fluffy. Yay! :D

Date: 2011-01-12 04:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
Indeed! Glad you liked.

Date: 2011-01-12 03:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kayoko.livejournal.com
*gasp* This was naughty. Naughty! Innuendos and actual smexing!

I love that icon, btw. No matter what, you'll always be drippingcherry to me.

EDIT: Darn those automagic forward of nick changes.
Edited Date: 2011-01-12 03:05 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-01-12 04:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
Thanks. :)

You can call me whatever you like!

Date: 2011-01-12 04:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tigersilver.livejournal.com
EEEE! I agree, Draco: 'More than alright!'
Nice one!

Date: 2011-01-12 04:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2011-01-12 05:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bleedforyou1.livejournal.com
Adorable! *squeals* cutecutecute :D

Date: 2011-01-12 12:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
Thanks :)

Date: 2011-01-12 12:40 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-01-12 05:37 am (UTC)
kitty_fic: (Default)
From: [personal profile] kitty_fic
OH my GUH!
That was so HOT!

and sweet and sexy and funny <3333

Date: 2011-01-12 12:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it. :)

Date: 2011-01-12 06:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valinorean.livejournal.com
damn, that was easily more erotic than a thousand word porn *guh*

Date: 2011-01-12 12:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
Thanks :)

Date: 2011-01-12 08:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fancypantsdylan.livejournal.com
Loved it, poor Draco but hopefully next time Harry will make it up to him, or they could just change positions ;)

Date: 2011-01-12 12:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
That's a good idea. Harry needs a bit of Slytherin in him, too. ;)

Date: 2011-01-12 10:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skriftlig.livejournal.com
I couldn't wait to read this after I'd seen the title and prompt!

Love how Draco can't seem to get angry with Harry over any of it.

Date: 2011-01-12 12:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
He's too in love, LOL.

Date: 2011-01-12 10:51 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-01-12 12:42 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-01-12 03:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sue-dell.livejournal.com
That was so sweet.

Date: 2011-01-13 05:01 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-01-12 07:23 pm (UTC)
ext_69972: pixel_bits (Default)
From: [identity profile] moonlitdark.livejournal.com
Mmm, lovely! ;)

Date: 2011-01-13 05:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
Thank you :)

Date: 2011-01-13 05:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] demicus.livejournal.com
I'll bet Draco will have a lot of Gryffindor inside him again very soon! lol

Date: 2011-01-14 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicevenn.livejournal.com
Lots more! LOL.
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